I have decided to make a story called: In the victims perspective. (WIP) Its about a man and a dog in a scenario where people are dying to a beast that is out of this world. It relates to the popular creepypasta "DO NOT LOOK UP" seen in the EAS horror community.
Heres a sneek peek:
I was just watching tv, my favorite show forensic files, as it showed up. An EAS Amber alert showed up it said that a child named brandon, 12 years old, was kidnapped from his home, and it said his parent were brutally murdered in their sleep. This startled me because our town was small ,490 people to be exact, no one in our town would do this. It later said a phenomenon was killing people all over kansas, wait... thats where i live, no one could tell or why but they said the CDC is looking into it to see if its an infection or a virus and told us to do basic handwashing/sanitary procedures. It went back to my show after that...
END OF SNEAK PEEK
Please give any criticism you need to address.
Or if i am copying and existing story