Hi Creepypasta lovers I finally finished my OC! Please don't be afraid to recommend changes and I hope you enjoy.
Rose was the shy emo girl in all of her classes, she never fit in anywhere and she didn’t have any friends. She wasn’t invisible or anything, a lot of people knew that she was there, but no one ever hung out with her or got to know her, so she was always what she feared, lonely. She wasn’t super ugly, but she wasn’t pretty either, she was 16 and had brown hair and blue eyes. She was just a normal girl living her version of a nightmare life. Rose lived with her aunt, uncle, and their son, so she was practically invisible at home unless they wanted something or were yelling at her. School was her escape from the present and past and when that doesn’t work, she has her art and music.
One day Rose was sitting in class her wrists in pain, like usual, listening to her music wishing she could just disappear. “Rose,” said the substitute teacher “is Rose here?”, “oh sorry, yes I’m here” the shy girl replies, “maybe you could hear better if you didn’t listen to that shit you call music so loudly,” said Amethyst Escobar. Rose just ignored here anyone with a brain does, but that’s not many people at Brightsville High, “Hey bitch, I’m talking to you” Amethyst yells. “Watch your language young lady,” says the sub “Screw you” she yells back and turns back to Rose “Hey emo girl! Stop ignoring me like a pussy.” “Alright, offices now!” the sub yells Amethyst flips her off, grabs her stuff, and leaves. But Rose didn’t notice she just turned up her music and blocked out the world. She soon fell asleep listening to her music and fell into a deep dream. A high pitched ringing sound blocked out the music, and a tall faceless creature appeared in front of her. He started to speak to her, but the voice didn’t fill her ears but instead her mind. “A rose might be pretty but one with its head cut off is just a bunch of thorns,” says the faceless man. At the sound of the bell, she jolts awake and heads to lunch.
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Later, at home in her room about to practice the piano when her cousin comes running in yelling at her for no reason “Are you listening Rose?” Rose answers back “I’m sorry but I need to practice”, “No you don’t you are just trying to be rude I’m going to call mom” he says and runs off. She takes a deep breath and goes back to playing the piano, with every note her vision blurs and ears ring as she enters an alternate reality, but her body plays on as the faceless figure appears again “Child” he says, “why do you play with no audience, and why do you cry when a rose is just thorns when it’s head is cut off, don’t worry they will all die.” As the last notes are struck she snaps back into reality. Rose looks at the time and heads to her lesson.
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The next day Rose is walking around town when she hears a voice behind her “Well look who it is” says Amethyst “It’s the weed. Hey Rose go join your family” she hits Rose with a bottle and liquid pours all over her. Unconscious Rose falls into a rose bush full of wilted roses and lots of thorns. Stuck and scratched Rose begins to wake up and cry. A few minutes later a guy listening to loud music walks by and flicks his cigarette towards the bush not hearing or seeing the stuck girl, the bush bursts into flames.
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A few days later Rose wakes up to darkness and the steady beeping of the heart rate monitor “what happened?” she thought to herself. “Oh, you’re awake.” A female voice says “I’m going to be your nurse until we can get those bandages off” during the few weeks she was in the hospital no one visited, no one sent cards or flowers, and no one brought here any music to listen to. The only thing she had to pass the time was the visits from the tall faceless figure that seemed to just be dreams that would occur over and over. Every time he came, he would fuel her hatred towards Amethyst and everyone who treated her badly.
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On the day she gets to remove the wraps the nurse comes in “you have some uh ... visitors” she says hesitantly. “Visitors?” Rose thought to herself “and why did she say that so hesitantly?”. The doctor comes in and asks, “are you ready?” Rose replys with a nod. Slowly the doctor unwraps the bandage from her face, light comes and assaults her eyes as the last bit of cloth falls to the floor. The doctor and nurse leave as she remembers she has gusts, when she looks over, she sees why the nurse was acting so weird. There in front of her were some of the best-looking groups of guys she had ever seen or at least tried to see because the fire had completely melted her glasses so she couldn’t see anything. What she could see was a boy with a wide smile, a tall boy dressed in black and white, and a boy in a black hoodie who wouldn’t make eye-contact. “How bad is it?” she asks, the boy with the wide smile says, “It’s not that bad.” then he laughs to himself lightly. The nurse brings in some glasses “your parents dropped this off for you” then hands her them and walks off. Rose starts to put the glasses on her face, but the tall boy says, “you should wait until you’re in front of a mirror”. So, she stands up and stumbles towards the mirror, and puts on her glasses . She looks at the mirror and sees her hair is messed up, her skin is leathery and there are scars all over her from where the thorns dug deep into her flesh. Rose laughs to herself a little and says “I’m going to need a haircut” when she turns around, she sees the mysterious visitors the boy with the big smile actually had a smile cut into him, the tall one in black and white had a full clown costume on, and the shy one with the black hoodie had no eyes at all but seems to see fine. “Who are you?” she asks. The boy with the cut in smile replies “I’m Jeff” the tall clown says in a playful tone “I’m LJ” the last boy mumbles “EJ”. “Nice to meet you, but why are you here?” Rose says Jeff answers, “He told us to look after you” “he who” responds Rose.“Don’t worry about that quite yet” says LJ.
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Rose sits at home while everyone is out having fun, the events from a few weeks playing over and over in her head, as she ponders about what she was going to do about Amethyst. That’s when they appeared again “hey Rose,” Jeff says “Oh, hey guys” she responds “Are you busy” asks LJ “No” says Rose “then come with us” Jeff says. Without thinking about what her parents would do if she wasn’t here when they came home, she says “Ok”. After walking for a little bit, the stop in front of a hose, Amethyst's hose. Amethyst comes out and locks the door and without thinking, Rose knocks Amethyst out. The boys help her take the body into the woods. When they were in the middle of the woods Amethyst wakes up not knowing what is going on, then she sees Rose “What are you doing” says Amethyst “Oh, nothing because when I’m done with you that’s what you’ll be” Rose replies “W-what do you mean?” Amethyst stammers as she tries to get out of the rose that had been tied around her. Rose grabs Amethyst’s hair and says “a popular girl might be a beautiful rose, but she still has flawed thorns then with a knife Rose slowly cuts off Amethyst’s head.
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The next day Rose wakes up “was it just a dream, I would never do that so of course it was a dream” she thinks to herself. She gets up and gets dressed for school, feeling oddly happy she puts on some makeup and does her hair. When she gets to school there’s a different feel to the air, some people stare at her as she walks by while others are staring at their phone at the latest news. It wasn’t until the third hour that she heard the news when Amethyst didn’t show up someone said that she was missing. panicked “Did I kill her” she pondered “I need to find the boys they will know.”
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Later that day Rose meets up with LJ, EJ, and Jeff “What happened last night?” she asks, “You killed the girl that hurt you, remember?” says Jeff. “That can’t be true that’s not me.” Rose says with a teary look “oh, but it is you it is, the new you, the fun you, the you that he wants you to be.” Lj responds with an eerie tone in his voice. “Who is he?” she begs “You will know in time,” EJ says softly.
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Rose gets home around six P.M.; she did her homework then started dinner. She made chicken, roasted potatoes, and roasted cauliflower with balsamic vinegar and brown sugar reduction along with a feta topping. When her family came home Rose made plates and handed out food. “Why are you still here, go eat and leave us alone? her mom says. “Ok” Rose replies. “Excuse me, you are supposed to say yes” her mom answers back “yes” Rose says back. “Yes, what?” her mom barks “yes mam,” Rose says back. “THAT'S IT I DON’T LIKE YOUR ATTITUDE GO TO YOUR ROOM” her mom yells’, so Rose goes to her room. Rose wakes up in the middle of the night, and calls the boys over. “I need help,” she tells them when they get here “With what?” Jeff asks “I’m tired of my family treating me like shit it’s there turn now” she replies, LJ smiles “Welcome back, let’s have some fun”
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The Peterson family slowly wakes up and finds themselves tied up in the woods with Rose standing in front of them with an old knife. “You all are nothing but the thorns in a rose, so like a rose, I will cut your head off to show your thorns says, Rose. The mother replies “please don’t hurt us we're so sorry just let us go” but the old rose was gone. The new Rose was the only one left and she felt so good to finally not have emotion get in her way “you first” she says to her uncle as she grabs him by the hair. Rose slowly slides the dull knife back and forth on his neck spilling his blood onto the grassy ground. When she was done with him she examined her work then tossed the head aside “your turn” she said with a menacing grin towards the eleven-year-old, and before he could protest she grabs hold of his hair and starts. His screams were like fuel to her. She loved the sound of it, when she finished with the little boy, her aunt was on the ground sobbing at the sight of her dead husband and son. “Why are you doing this says her aunt “Because living with you is worse pain then you will feel when I cut your head off” Rose replies happily then Rose takes a hold of her aunt's hair, says “goodbye”, and does to her what she had done to the others. When she finished, the tall faceless figure appears from behind a tree “Child it’s time to come home and join you true family” with his tendrils he picks her up and takes her to the mansion that she now calls home.