Eyeless Jack

Feedback and ideas are appreciated 

So im doing a dark fantasy rewrite of numerous creepypastas as well as characters from the Slenderman mythos and Fear mythos.

I've been working on it for a while and, if you guys want, I can share some of what I've been making

Now when I say rewrite, im doing more than just giving some characters new powers, im rewriting their entire backstories, but only a few. Like Clockwork and Judge Angels

Right now im trying to figure out giving some characters special abilities.

The characters im having trouble figuring out how to add powers to are

Bloody Painter

Clockwork

Eyeless Jack

Jeff the Killer

Judge Angels

Nina the killer

Ticci-Toby

The idea for Bloody Painter is to make him like Sai from Naruto Shippuden and give him art magic

Clockwork is the one im most stuck on. I want to give her a power that involves time manipulation, but that gets really hard to work around. So then I thought, what if I just give her berserker rage, but Jeff was going to have that.

If you guys want, I can upload some snippets of worldbuilding notes, and other things.

I'm really excited to share this with all of you. Have a wonderful day/night

Kastoway/GrisGrisDoll (Created Ticci Toby in 2012): Even though Toby is no longer apart of this fandom, people continuously pester Wade/Nancy about Ticci Toby after they've stated multiple times in the past that they want absolutely nothing to do with Toby. Wade/Nancy also has to deal with people who've claimed to see Toby himself, a fictional character. Remind of you of something that happened 8 years ago? Wade/Nancy acknowledges that they can't stop people from using their character, but the most they could do is politely ask for others to reduce the use of Toby, which has not been respected.

Azelf5000 (Created Eyeless Jack in 2012): Although Joey was one to immediately disappear from the fandom and never come back since then, Joey has stated that he regrets the creation of Eyeless Jack, deleting the story days after it was published. Never has Joey stated clearly that he didn't want any association with Jack, but I would guess that him regretting the story in the first place is enough to say that he prefers not to talk about him.

Soffbois/Leafcrowns (Created Clockwork in 2012): I'd like to say that Daniel is nicer than some of the others when asked about his creation but mind you that Clockwork's foundation is solely based on Daniel's traumas. Daniel has even stated himself that he's fine with people using Clockwork without his permission but wishes not to have any association of the character as it brings back bad memories.

Jessica Halonen (Created Carmen Winstead in 2005): Jessica is lesser known as she's a rare person to hear from, but here recently, she's been bombed with questions and memes about her creation. Like the creator of Clockwork, Jessica doesn't mind if people use her character, but she wishes not to have any association with it. She claims that 'They Pushed Her' was originally a vent story because she actually suffered the events of bullying, not a chain mail or silly meme. Jessica states that she views her creation as cringe-worthy and juvenile as she wrote the story when she was 14 years old.

My favorite one so far.

How does EJ find the kidneys? And so precisely? Is it the demon, or was he getting a doctorate in the medical field while in college.

Please I want to know your honest opinions

Jeff: Don’t worry, I have a few knives up my sleeve.

Laughing Jack: I think you mean cards.

Jeff, pulling knives out of his sleeves: No, I do not.

EJ: *Screams*

Jeff: *Screams louder to establish dominance*

Laughing Jack: Should we do something?

Ben: No, I want to see who wins.

Clockwork: There is no future. there is no past. do you see? Time is simultaneous, an intricately structured jewel that humans insist on viewing one edge at a time, when the whole design is visible in every facet.

Jeff:

Laughing Jack:

Ben:

Everyone Else At Clockwork’s Surprise Birthday Party:

Jeff: All I asked was if you wanted to cut your birthday cake first.

(ty ScatterPatter's Incorrect Quotes Generator for these quotes)

Am I funny? Probably not.

Just askin'

So I need help with figuring out a species for this...test oc seeing as i had 0 idea a wiki like this existed and I wanna do well on the first shot. so...species and tips..please

Name: Zane Miller

Appearance: Brown Hair, ice blue eyes,

Birthday: October 12th

Zodiac: Libra

Sexuality: Pansexual

YOB: 1999

Age:(Unknown but looks to be in his 20's)

Height: 5'9

Species: Ghoul

Distinct Features: Dead ice blue eyes

Aliases: Z, Blood breath, Ghoul, Zombie

Occupation:[None]

Personality: Quiet, Cold, Sociopathic, Manipulative, Strong yet oh so Silent

Likes: Eating(People and Regular food), Iguanas and Other reptiles

Dislikes: Getting shot, stabbed, or attacked for no reason, getting one of his tendrils cut off, being called Z

Fears: Fire, Love, Death

Powers:

Healing factor

Tendrils

Natural weaponry(Claws)

Matter Ingestion

Enhanced Strength

Enhanced Speed

Enhanced Senses

Enhanced Durability

Supernatural Smell

Contaminant Immunity

Disease Immunity

Skills:

Jeet Kune Do Intuition

Ansatsuken Intuition

Great Babysitter

Good at soccer

Martial artist

Slight-of-Hand

Parkour

Weaknesses:

Trouble controlling Instincts when hungry

Damage to his heart or brain will kill him

Problems: Powers need more work(Maybe)

Need more weaknesses

Clothing: Blue ripped jeans, Gas mask, Industrial piercings, Black shirt with a Lightning bolt on it, Necklace with a blue gem hanging from it

Extra Facts:

He Thinks Hyp Is really cool

I wanna know who you guys think which Creepypasta I should draw?

The most commented will be picked

Ends on 12/1/21, in which is when I will start drawing

The Slender Blade is a long, silver, double-edged dagger with a marble handle that can be used to kill Slenderman, his proxies, and other supernatural creatures. When the blade is used to kill the Slenderman, he will bleed white blood, then finally explode in a shower of white goo, but unlike other normal human weapons used to try to hurt the Slenderman it will drag him and his proxies along into PURGATORY

Can someone tell me?

And someone can fix my grammer?

Comment your names! I will pick a lucky 3 people for me to use their names in my Creepypasta that I'm releasing sometime THIS WEEK!