BEN Drowned

Feedback and ideas are appreciated 

So im doing a dark fantasy rewrite of numerous creepypastas as well as characters from the Slenderman mythos and Fear mythos.

I've been working on it for a while and, if you guys want, I can share some of what I've been making

Now when I say rewrite, im doing more than just giving some characters new powers, im rewriting their entire backstories, but only a few. Like Clockwork and Judge Angels

Right now im trying to figure out giving some characters special abilities.

The characters im having trouble figuring out how to add powers to are

Bloody Painter

Clockwork

Eyeless Jack

Jeff the Killer

Judge Angels

Nina the killer

Ticci-Toby

The idea for Bloody Painter is to make him like Sai from Naruto Shippuden and give him art magic

Clockwork is the one im most stuck on. I want to give her a power that involves time manipulation, but that gets really hard to work around. So then I thought, what if I just give her berserker rage, but Jeff was going to have that.

If you guys want, I can upload some snippets of worldbuilding notes, and other things.

I'm really excited to share this with all of you. Have a wonderful day/night

Jeff: Don’t worry, I have a few knives up my sleeve.

Laughing Jack: I think you mean cards.

Jeff, pulling knives out of his sleeves: No, I do not.

EJ: *Screams*

Jeff: *Screams louder to establish dominance*

Laughing Jack: Should we do something?

Ben: No, I want to see who wins.

Clockwork: There is no future. there is no past. do you see? Time is simultaneous, an intricately structured jewel that humans insist on viewing one edge at a time, when the whole design is visible in every facet.

Jeff:

Laughing Jack:

Ben:

Everyone Else At Clockwork’s Surprise Birthday Party:

Jeff: All I asked was if you wanted to cut your birthday cake first.

(ty ScatterPatter's Incorrect Quotes Generator for these quotes)

Am I funny? Probably not.

Just askin'

So I need help with figuring out a species for this...test oc seeing as i had 0 idea a wiki like this existed and I wanna do well on the first shot. so...species and tips..please

@Mikorino Girl! had requested me to draw Suicide Mouse, and since I am doing wholesome art, i chose this!

Look at Ben help Silver ^^

(edit: better quality one)

Also, these two are shipped, and I find it cute- Lost Drowned- nah, Ben Silver ^^

Name: Zane Miller

Appearance: Brown Hair, ice blue eyes,

Birthday: October 12th

Zodiac: Libra

Sexuality: Pansexual

YOB: 1999

Age:(Unknown but looks to be in his 20's)

Height: 5'9

Species: Ghoul

Distinct Features: Dead ice blue eyes

Aliases: Z, Blood breath, Ghoul, Zombie

Occupation:[None]

Personality: Quiet, Cold, Sociopathic, Manipulative, Strong yet oh so Silent

Likes: Eating(People and Regular food), Iguanas and Other reptiles

Dislikes: Getting shot, stabbed, or attacked for no reason, getting one of his tendrils cut off, being called Z

Fears: Fire, Love, Death

Powers:

Healing factor

Tendrils

Natural weaponry(Claws)

Matter Ingestion

Enhanced Strength

Enhanced Speed

Enhanced Senses

Enhanced Durability

Supernatural Smell

Contaminant Immunity

Disease Immunity

Skills:

Jeet Kune Do Intuition

Ansatsuken Intuition

Great Babysitter

Good at soccer

Martial artist

Slight-of-Hand

Parkour

Weaknesses:

Trouble controlling Instincts when hungry

Damage to his heart or brain will kill him

Problems: Powers need more work(Maybe)

Need more weaknesses

Clothing: Blue ripped jeans, Gas mask, Industrial piercings, Black shirt with a Lightning bolt on it, Necklace with a blue gem hanging from it

Extra Facts:

He Thinks Hyp Is really cool

I wanna know who you guys think which Creepypasta I should draw?

The most commented will be picked

Ends on 12/1/21, in which is when I will start drawing

The Slender Blade is a long, silver, double-edged dagger with a marble handle that can be used to kill Slenderman, his proxies, and other supernatural creatures. When the blade is used to kill the Slenderman, he will bleed white blood, then finally explode in a shower of white goo, but unlike other normal human weapons used to try to hurt the Slenderman it will drag him and his proxies along into PURGATORY

Can someone tell me?

And someone can fix my grammer?

Comment your names! I will pick a lucky 3 people for me to use their names in my Creepypasta that I'm releasing sometime THIS WEEK!

I drew this art with my fingers and my mobile phone and I think now my fingers are dead because it was really hard and it took six hours to finish.

Without blood

With some blood

(This nurse was also present in homicidal Liu's story)

Ok I'm here and I'm still Alive

From today, I will paint the characters that need art

I do not know how to draw well, but I hope you like it

Art by me (normal)

Art by me (glitch)

Orginal picture

I hope you like it •-• :@Amy the Crying Girl

Guys what is creepypasta cringe or troll?

What are their characteristics? And how can I prevent my character from being cringe?

(Sorry for my bad English)

I'm a little upset

May I ask who the hater is and what hater wants?

And are the ideas of a hater correct?

I'm just a little upset

And what is creepypasta cringe?

💕About Me💕

Hi! My name is Alice. I am twenty-one years old.And since I was nine years old, I have loved reading horror and crime stories,.And I was very interested in making a character for Creepy Pasta. And I hope you like my character.But unfortunately I can not speak English well, so I use Translate to talk to you

💫About my character💫

ғᴜʟʟ ɴᴀᴍᴇ:

Susan Adkinson➵

ᴘʀᴏɴᴜɴᴄɪᴀᴛɪᴏɴ:

/ˈsuːzən/➵

ғɪʀsᴛ ɴᴀᴍᴇ ᴍᴇᴀɴɪɴɢ:Susan is a feminine given name, from Persian "lily flower", from Egyptian sšn and Coptic shoshen meaning "lotus flower",[1] from Hebrew Shoshana meaning "lily" (in modern Hebrew this also means "rose" and a flower in general), from Greek Sousanna, from Latin Susanna, from Old French Susanne.

➵ ʟᴀsᴛ ɴᴀᴍᴇ ᴍᴇᴀɴɪɴɢ:The surname Adkinson was first found in the counties of Northumberland and Cumberland where they held a family seat from ancient times long before the Norman Conquest in 1066. The name was derived from Atkin and Adkin

➵ ᴀʟɪᴀs:

Homicidal susan

Sussie

"Virago" [split personality]

➵ Age:22 years old

Production date: 2019

Date of release: 2022 (coming soon)➵I am trying to make Susan famousand Susan is going to be an official in 2022, and I will try to make her famous➵

♡We used these characters to make Susan♡

➵Jane the everlasting /Jane the killer➵

Susan's story is like Jane everlasting, and I wrote a story almost like Jane for her, and she's a vengeful serial killer like Jane and Nina

➵Homicidal Liu➵

This character is also present in Susan's story, and Susan's appearance is similar to Liu's character and she wants to kill Liu

➵Alice Angel from Bendy and the ink machine Susan's personality is similar to Alice Angel. And she wants to be beautiful again.

♡Backstory♡

•Her story has not been translated into English yet, but I will post it to you whenever her story is translated•

I'm so sorry for my bad English（◞‸◟)